But omg, his hair is awful. Not as bad as Cordelia's hair got in AtS but still awful. I keep rewatching "Shut Up, Dr. Phil," and I never fail to notice it.
Yes, you get to bug me! I appreciate it! I did go back to it, although I still have a few thousand more words to write for Chap. 2. However, if at any point you want what I do have so far (which is about 5,000 words), I would be happy to email it to you. I can't promise it's exciting because it's very much "minute-by-minute-emergency-day-in-the-life-of," but it's yours if you want it. The minutiae is why it's slow-going and I'm having trouble writing it; most of the story as I have it planned is going to be more vignette-like and emotionally introspective, but the first few chapters, where they're all "what the fuck is going on?!?" has to, for obvious reasons, be more plot-oriented. I'm much more enthusiastic about later chapters, but I obviously have to get through the beginning first.
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Date: 2012-01-22 03:22 am (UTC)But omg, his hair is awful. Not as bad as Cordelia's hair got in AtS but still awful. I keep rewatching "Shut Up, Dr. Phil," and I never fail to notice it.
Yes, you get to bug me! I appreciate it! I did go back to it, although I still have a few thousand more words to write for Chap. 2. However, if at any point you want what I do have so far (which is about 5,000 words), I would be happy to email it to you. I can't promise it's exciting because it's very much "minute-by-minute-emergency-day-in-the-life-of," but it's yours if you want it. The minutiae is why it's slow-going and I'm having trouble writing it; most of the story as I have it planned is going to be more vignette-like and emotionally introspective, but the first few chapters, where they're all "what the fuck is going on?!?" has to, for obvious reasons, be more plot-oriented. I'm much more enthusiastic about later chapters, but I obviously have to get through the beginning first.