I read it through twice, and I ended up all weepy both times. ACTUAL TEARS FROM MY EYES, OKAY?
THAT'S LIKE THE NICEST THING YOU COULD SAY.
I love her interrogating Jared, and how her manner changes as she gets more of his story
I am so glad you like them! They were SO much fun to write this way.
I choose to take that last bit to mean that she's an alpha. :D
:DDD Mebbe
Thank you so much for the long and detailed and thoughtful comment and for telling me the lines you liked! I am pleased as punch that it delighted you. ♥
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Date: 2013-11-19 03:08 am (UTC)THAT'S LIKE THE NICEST THING YOU COULD SAY.
I love her interrogating Jared, and how her manner changes as she gets more of his story
I am so glad you like them! They were SO much fun to write this way.
I choose to take that last bit to mean that she's an alpha. :D
:DDD Mebbe
Thank you so much for the long and detailed and thoughtful comment and for telling me the lines you liked! I am pleased as punch that it delighted you. ♥