What a lovely way to end this fantastic story. If only season 9 were to go like this...
I absolutely loved Buffy's freak-out over the potion, and all the things that she thought of when that came up. Dawn was wonderful, 'cause of course she sees and understands and helps them on their way. The meta parts made me giggle and I think you did a good job not letting them taking over the story, they were just enough in the background to make it work really well.
Again, I loved this story a lot, and while I adored this ending I'd be happy to read any alt ending you might write. ♥
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Date: 2011-02-02 04:27 pm (UTC)I absolutely loved Buffy's freak-out over the potion, and all the things that she thought of when that came up. Dawn was wonderful, 'cause of course she sees and understands and helps them on their way. The meta parts made me giggle and I think you did a good job not letting them taking over the story, they were just enough in the background to make it work really well.
Again, I loved this story a lot, and while I adored this ending I'd be happy to read any alt ending you might write. ♥